IELTS writing practice 19

  Given are two figures illustrating the circumstances of one country’s exports. The one provides data on the benefits of this country’s different exports, while the other reveals the development of proportion in kinds of exports between 2015 and 2016.

It is apparent from the information suppiled by these two diagram that, from about 61 billion dollars to 63 billion dollars, revenues from the most profitable petroleum products exports increased by 3 percent in percentage change of value between 2015 and 2016.

Furthermore, export of engineered goods rose from approximate 57 billion dollars to 61 billion dollars, and the proportion change in value increased 8.5 percent.

Meanwhile, although all of other exports raised,from about 43 billion dollars to 41 billion dollars, the export of gems and jewellery declined by 5.18 percent in propotion change of value. But it remains country’s third-largest export industry.

As for the rest two export industry, profit from agricultural products export rose slightly from around 31 billion dollars to 32 billion dollars, and its percentage change in value increased by 0.81 percent.

Export of textiles earned about 26 billion dollars in 2015 and 32 billion dollars in 2016. Thus its percentage change in value jumped by 15.24 percent.

To sum up, this country’s export industry was extremely successful between 2015 and 2016.

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