IELTS writing practice 10

Nowadays, in some countries, it’s extremely essential for some people to purchase their own house, although this may not be the case for others. But what caused this situation?

As far as I’m concerned, there are several reasons for this phenomenon, but in general, they can come down to three main ones.

First of all, owning a house instead of renting one can avoid quite a lot of trouble, since you can possess all the rights in relation to this house, which means that you can whatever you want to do with it. If you just rent a apartment to live, you can’t paint the wall without the permission from landlord when you find that the walls in your room are scratched. Moreover, you can’t even guarantee that you’ll be sleeping in the same bed the next day, our life is alway full of suprises, we don’t know when the landlord will kick you out of the apartment.

Secondly, ownership of a house can provide a sense of safety. It’s a part of human nature to avoid risk and owning your own home can give people a sense of security, especially for people with family. It’s no matter for a bachelor to be kicked out of the apartment, because his cost of change apartment is pretty low. But for a family, the opposite is true. Due to their quite high cost of moving house, it’s impossible for a family who rent a apartment not to worry about whether the landlord will continue to rent the house to them after the contract expires.

At last, in the aspect of realistic, in some countries such like China, it’s necessary for a couple who want to get married to possess their own house, since if they don’t own a property in the local area, they and their children will not be allowed to get a local hukou, which means this family will be greatly limited in local service of social security.

To sum up, the reasons why this phenomenon takes place mainly are demand based on realistic and mental. it’s a natural development in specific situation, therefore it’s impossible for me to arbitrarily judge whether it’s positive or negative.

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